can you give your opinion on my resume,CV ?

Mathe D asked:


PROFILE

A dynamic highly-motivated, confident and ambitious SALES REPRESENTATIVE with excellent people-skills and genuine interest in the customers well-being.
Infects those around him with enthusiasm for work and challenges.
Articulate and energetic communicator with great listening skills and deep personal interest in the customer.
EDUCATION

European School of Economics, London, 2006-2007
Goethe Gymnasium, Vienna, 1998-2006
Volkschule Mondweg, Vienna, 1994-1998
WORK EXPERIENCE

NEUSTART, 2007-08
Tropicana Event Management, 2004-07

SKILLS / ADDITIONAL EDUCATION
Sales Success Seminar
Public speaking training
Goal-setting course

WORK PHILOSOPHY

I believe that lasting success is the result of honest and committed effort and the genuine desire to be of service to the customer and I am determined and enthusiastic fulfill these requirements.

Arianna

One Response

  1. Sarah Says:

    Christopher

    PROFILE:
    -Shorten this… long-winded openings can cause your resume to end up in the garbage rather than on a desk.
    -Replace the word Infect… it has a negative connotation, despite how it’s being used.
    -You mentioned your interest in the customer twice, which is redundant… to me, it says you talk too much. Fix this.

    EDUCATION:
    -Mention your degrees, if any.

    WORK EXPERIENCE:
    -What did you do while at Tropicana? Mention your duties, and especially, your ACCOMPLISHMENTS! Showing how you went above and beyond the call of duty always looks good.

    SKILLS / ADDITIONAL EDUCATION:
    -Mention the year of the seminars/training courses
    -I owould recommend removing that goal-setting course. To me, it says I need help to accomplish anything. Let them think you’re an all-natural go-getter.

    WORK PHILOSOPHY:
    -Unnecessary. This is information that comes out in the interview process. Remove this completely.

    Hope that helps!