How can I improve my mission statement?

griscel m asked:


I;m doing this personal mission statement for school. I think it needs improvement, but I don’t know what. Please help.

My mission is to accomplish my goal of obtaining a rewarding career so that I can provide stability and set a valuable example to my family. I will do this by passing the RHIA certification exam and work for progressive employer that allows me to use my education, skills, talent, and values to achieve success.

Natalie

One Response

  1. Bailey Says:

    Nathan

    thats really good! keep it. it shows determiniation and willpower.